The Meeting Place
The Meeting PlaceWhen the wind swept round the hill topand the trees bent lowWe stood at the foot and watchedthe rituals unfolding.No sound. We saw the wind draw its knives,and the High Priests...
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Wow Davie!! This is stunning - so atmospheric. It has a sense of serenity about it - despite the victims at the close."A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a...
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I feel as though I'm hiding and watching the proceedings from behind a big rock or tree. Very well done. Creepy atmosphere.Suzanne
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Many thanks Valoe, and Suzanne, for your comments. Much appreciated.Davie
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Awesome write Dt! (Even the 3rd time through. *smirks*) Much, much enjoyed this read, thansk for sharing it.PoThe wolf howled under the leavesAnd spit out the prettiest flowersof his meal of fowl:Like...
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oh!! *shivers* this is excellent, davie ... outstanding imagery and a truly haunting feel! compelling and very much enjoyed this gem Why do we close our eyes when we dream, imagine, or kiss? Because...
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Thank you Po, and Beth, for your kind words - much appreciated! I rather enjoyed writing it!Davie
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Hi rouge - yes, I think they've gone away now! (but they could come back) Davie
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